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Hi guys, I need your help with this!

This is my final uni assignment for Multimedia Studio. We were asked to make an 'interactive multimedia tool' to help teach teenagers and young adults to learn about consumer protection... and make it FUN! (Oh god...) How the heck do you make consumer protection fun? You take the piss out of it. :XD:

Anyway, I was hoping that some of you could go through it. I'm not sure how it'll run on other computers, or how hard or easy the thing is to navigate. ^^; Hopefully there aren't any bugs getting from one screen to the next, but if there are, please tell me.

^^ There are eleven different endings in all.

Oh! :XD: And you'll get to hear my magnificent voice acting skills! I hope I don't kill too many ears...

Time: Approx 5-8 hours a week over 6 weeks. =_= Too much work!
Programs: Flash MX 2004, Freehand MX for vectors, Audiacity, Garageband and Audition for sound. Did I mention this was a big project? ^^;
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Critique by dcarlc Apr 21, 2014, 5:12:45 PM
I definitely see what you were trying to do here, and I think you pulled it off almost flawlessly. It felt like a children's show, but it was meant for an older demographic. I was quite amused at some of the endings, and I think you have a future in writing stories. Unfortunately, everything has flaws. In this case, it lies in the animation. It isn't BAD, but it isn't the best thing I've ever seen. If you put more work into that, this would be a WONDERFUL little interactive story. (I mean, it's wonderful already, but if you want the CAPITAL letters which emphasize its wonderfulness, you need to fix the animation.) If I were your teacher, I would say you succeeded in your goal of making an educational, yet amusing experience. I can see you put a lot of effort into this, and it paid off. But since I'm NOT your teacher, I can't give you the A you deserve. 30-48 hours is a lot of time for something like this, and you definitely used your time well. I shall give you 4.8/5 stars. I can't wait to see your next animation. (If you make one, that is.)
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:iconskunkyproductions:
skunkyproductions Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XD not a real flying car
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:iconxxdoctormythxx:
xXDoctorMythXx Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Student Artist
omfg it ate me!<br / />
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:iconlynchly:
Lynchly Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I got myself a car! 8D
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:iconxx9thsquadakanexx:
xX9thsquadAkaneXx Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012   General Artist
love it when you try to buy the evil car lol xD great work
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:iconvcstorm:
vcstorm Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011
i like it:) its cool!
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:iconmeachie:
meachie Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010  Student Digital Artist
sweet i liked throwing the axe over and over XD

you should make more (different tittles) in your spare time
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:iconharujam:
HaruJam Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
haha. i really like this.
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:iconsarastra:
Sarastra Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010
yap, it's fun. :)
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:iconbroettonavarro:
broettonavarro Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
hehehehe I just loved it! amazing work!
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:iconfragmented-mask:
Fragmented-Mask Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2009
This is great.... It's just fantastic. I can't stop laughing at some of the choices... damn evil car...
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:iconmillieishtarmotou:
MillieIshtarMotou Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2009
This is SO cute XD and funny.

I really want both those flying cars XDD
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:iconqrs22:
qrs22 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow.
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:iconmegaflan:
MegaFlan Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
rofl what an entertaining game xD

Jimmy's space bubble-like helmet reminds me of Olimar's from pikmin (with the antennae and all)
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:iconala-rai:
Ala-Rai Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Just discovered this and it is so much fun!
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:iconphloio:
Phloio Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2009
Osom!!! (awesome)
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:iconreikoku:
Reikoku Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2008
That is so adorable!
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:iconhjernedoed:
Hjernedoed Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
i like it 8D . and i'm so clever.. and i like that little car.. sooow cute 8D
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:iconnekogirl8000:
Nekogirl8000 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2008
lol "Jimmy's new car tries to eat him." I loved that part :XD:
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:icondresdenmurderscene:
DresdenMurderScene Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
that 'OMG111' Beetle is the cutest car i've ever seen.
Also its fun ruining Jimmy's life by making him buy houses after he bought a dodgy car.
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:iconlathrine:
Lathrine Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2008
What I learned from this game; I want that "OMG1111" plate, dammit! XD
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:icongosurori-otaku:
Gosurori-Otaku Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008
Woop! Hooray for the evilness!
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:iconshieda:
Shieda Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2007
I win!!!!! Aesome
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:iconjudgemyartnotmyname:
judgemyartnotmyname Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007
i like it there really is no way to get perfect in life is there
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:iconddrmushroom:
DDRmushroom Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
That's why I never buy a car without looking at its history
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:iconyoyoma72:
yoyoma72 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2007
LOL!!! this is funny XD!!! It's fun throwing axe ^-^! good job :):):)
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:icondxcloud:
Dxcloud Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2007
nice work are u a multimedia student?
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:iconfireblaze247:
Fireblaze247 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2007
Ha ha I soo Stupid ^^;
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:iconnrutan:
nruTAN Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2007
THIS IS FUN! I was smart! :D :clap: I got the pretty an' cute one! The right choice!

Then I ruined his life by trying out all the possibilities. Fun!
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:iconrynprov:
rynprov Featured By Owner May 13, 2007
Cool game!
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:iconsnakeluvr117:
snakeluvr117 Featured By Owner May 4, 2007
:giggle: poor jimmy
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:iconnotfanny:
NotFanny Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2007
Ahem. You win. At life. This had me laughing so freakin' hard. Particularly when I saw who the hitman was. XD It's evil. And yet. I still picked it. XD
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:iconmeh1220:
Meh1220 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2007
:D
Flying car thats afraid of heights... I love it!
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:iconmomoriah13:
momoriah13 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2007
i like how jimmy talks in 3red preson poin of view!
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:iconneverlove:
neverlove Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2007
I love buying the car from the private salesman, then buying his house. xD
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:iconthesongismine:
TheSongIsMine Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2007
How cute! I did take the time to work through all the options, and I thought it was very well done! Humourous and cute with some good lessons thrown in (such as avoiding cars that eat people). I'm impressed.
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:iconjurf-rokstar:
jurf-rokstar Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2007
FREAKING HI-LARIOUS. I loved all the stupid choices.
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:iconcoofie-irmawater:
Coofie-IrmaWater Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2007
ah i love it
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:iconsanctumgaurdian:
SanctumGaurdian Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2007
Hill arious!
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:iconrunescapeandmaple:
runescapeandmaple Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thats one heck of a good game - we learn something and its quite fun!
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:iconarchangelxamy:
ArchangelXAmy Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2006
DUDE THIS ROX!!!! I think it's fine and I most certanly learned something. Good job.
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:icongloryblaz:
gloryblaz Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thats really cute XD
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:iconlaubwald:
laubwald Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2006
loved it, very cute!
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:iconfallen-angel-06:
Fallen-angel-06 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Thats funny! I don't know how taping the cars mouth shut would work though ... lol
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:iconchrishankhah:
Chrishankhah Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
** Ah hah! Now I get it. "Evil car" is a second option. My eyes missed the arrow. I might recommend some sort of text, like "next car" or "more options" printed over it. Very cute though! ^_^
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Chrishankhah Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
That's too cute. *grin*

Just curious about one thing. 11 endings? If I exclude the axe throwing thing, (which doesn't really result in an ending,) I'm only getting 7, or 8 if I include it. What am I missing?
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:iconlilbratt:
lilbratt Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2006
bit boring
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:iconrisachantag:
Risachantag Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2006
So's your comment.
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:iconlilbratt:
lilbratt Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2006
whatever..i jus think there can b more 2 it
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:iconrisachantag:
Risachantag Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2006
Sure... 3 different stories, 11 different endings. Six weeks of work. I'm really glad to see you appreciate the work that's gone into it. </end sarcasm> I can see you're new to DA, perhaps you've miss understood something, but if you're going to leave a comment then try to give constructive critism. 'bit boring' is not constructive.
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