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October 25, 2005
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Hi guys, I need your help with this!

This is my final uni assignment for Multimedia Studio. We were asked to make an 'interactive multimedia tool' to help teach teenagers and young adults to learn about consumer protection... and make it FUN! (Oh god...) How the heck do you make consumer protection fun? You take the piss out of it. :XD:

Anyway, I was hoping that some of you could go through it. I'm not sure how it'll run on other computers, or how hard or easy the thing is to navigate. ^^; Hopefully there aren't any bugs getting from one screen to the next, but if there are, please tell me.

^^ There are eleven different endings in all.

Oh! :XD: And you'll get to hear my magnificent voice acting skills! I hope I don't kill too many ears...

Time: Approx 5-8 hours a week over 6 weeks. =_= Too much work!
Programs: Flash MX 2004, Freehand MX for vectors, Audiacity, Garageband and Audition for sound. Did I mention this was a big project? ^^;
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I definitely see what you were trying to do here, and I think you pulled it off almost flawlessly. It felt like a children's show, but it was meant for an older demographic. I was quite amused at some of the endings, and I think you have a future in writing stories. Unfortunately, everything has flaws. In this case, it lies in the animation. It isn't BAD, but it isn't the best thing I've ever seen. If you put more work into that, this would be a WONDERFUL little interactive story. (I mean, it's wonderful already, but if you want the CAPITAL letters which emphasize its wonderfulness, you need to fix the animation.) If I were your teacher, I would say you succeeded in your goal of making an educational, yet amusing experience. I can see you put a lot of effort into this, and it paid off. But since I'm NOT your teacher, I can't give you the A you deserve. 30-48 hours is a lot of time for something like this, and you definitely used your time well. I shall give you 4.8/5 stars. I can't wait to see your next animation. (If you make one, that is.)
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skunkyproductions Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XD not a real flying car
Mythraill Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Student Artist
omfg it ate me!<br / />
Lynchly Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I got myself a car! 8D
xX9thsquadAkaneXx Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012   General Artist
love it when you try to buy the evil car lol xD great work
vcstorm Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011
i like it:) its cool!
meachie Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010  Student Digital Artist
sweet i liked throwing the axe over and over XD

you should make more (different tittles) in your spare time
HaruJam Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
haha. i really like this.
Sarastra Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010
yap, it's fun. :)
broettonavarro Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
hehehehe I just loved it! amazing work!
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