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Hi guys, I need your help! This is an incomplete project that I'm working on for one of my Multimedia Design units (I'll take it down later). It's meant to be an interactive narrative/informational project for late primary to early highschool kids. We're meant to introduce the 'space' of a person or character (rather like the SBS "My Space is an Amazing Space" project: [link] ).

As part of one of my theory courses, I need to do a quick survey to get some feedback on this project. It'd really help me if you could answer a few questions.

This is what I need:

How old are you?
Did you have any problems navigating around the project?
Did you learn anything, or find the project interesting?
Did you like the visuals (drawings, animation etc)?


Problems I'm aware of:
-Sound is incomplete
-Sound goes out of synch on some computers
-The only section working in the 'memory' section is Brain Facts.
-There's no way to view the intro animation again.

Thanks guys! I've had more than enough responses now, you've been really helpful!
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:iconsantaflan:
SantaFlan Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011
Much better organized than most websites I've been to.
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:icongrayfox1993:
GrayFox1993 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
the voice reminds me of starcraft :D
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:iconsantaflan:
SantaFlan Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011
"Incoming Transmission" lol
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:icontorially-sama15:
ToriAlly-sama15 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I'm 14,and there were no problems with navigation.I learned a lot about memory,so thanks for that.The visuals and the project itself are amazing! Good job!
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:iconlukirashingurae:
LukiraShingurae Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2009
I'm 23. I learned a few things. I enjoyed the visual aspects and I didn't have any problem navigating. Nice work.
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:iconbonnybanshey:
bonnybanshey Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2009   Artist
I fairly enjoyed it
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:iconunaangelfay:
UnaAngelFay Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2008
Did you ever finish this?
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:iconkodomokurai:
KodomoKurai Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2007  Student General Artist
How old are you? 15
Did you have any problems navigating around the project? Nope.^.^
Did you learn anything, or find the project interesting? It was really intresting and everything on there was stuff I didn't know about.
Did you like the visuals (drawings, animation etc)? Yes. They were nice.
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:iconanime-zone:
Anime-zone Featured By Owner May 6, 2007
that is pretty cool, and like really fun to watch, didnt realize there was some sound til i was almost done looking through all of it. but cant wait to see the other two things that says under construction!
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:iconakuma-no-miraizou:
Akuma-no-Miraizou Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2007
Age: 18
I exprienced no problems while navigating the project.
I found this very interesting. The visuals were beautifully done and it was also very informative.
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:iconhanyou-night:
Hanyou-Night Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Im 15 almost 16

No I had no problem working this

I think this is really interesting. Its informative and it will help alot of younger kids. They art and animation is really cool. I know if we had stuff like this in school I would have paid attention more.
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:iconmygzus:
mygzus Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Age: 13 almost 14
The visuals are great, but maybe they need a little more detail
I love the facts. Even though I already knew them, it refreshed my memory.
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XfallenxemoX Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2007
How old are you? 14

Did you have any problems navigating around the project? yeah, i had to keep clicking Perception thats all.

Did you learn anything, or find the project interesting? Learnt that long term and short term my effect the dreams of one creature =P

Did you like the visuals (drawings, animation etc)? yes.
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:iconlayroo:
Layroo Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2007
How old are you? 18
Did you have any problems navigating around the project? nope
Did you learn anything, or find the project interesting? a few things..
Did you like the visuals (drawings, animation etc)? they're amusing!
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:iconsmek:
Smek Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2007
How old are you? 19
Did you have any problems navigating around the project? nope, easy to understand
Did you learn anything, or find the project interesting? Very interesting, and learned alittle to
Did you like the visuals (drawings, animation etc)? Love them ;)

the problems i can see you already have discovered, so i hope to se the finished product :)
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:iconartbarker:
ArtBarker Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How old are you? 16
Did you have any problems navigating around the project? nope
Did you learn anything, or find the project interesting? it is very informative :heart:
Did you like the visuals (drawings, animation etc)? yep


hope to see the rest when it's finished
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:iconquartzcrystal:
QuartzCrystal Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2006
way cool!lol
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:iconnightwind2013:
nightwind2013 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2006
This is just awesome
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:iconhana-maehata:
Hana-Maehata Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2006
How old are you? 14
Did you have any problems navigating around the project? None whatsoever!
Did you learn anything, or find the project interesting? This was very cool! Every spot I was amazed by all the facts!
Did you like the visuals (drawings, animation etc)? The style you put it in was very cool indeed!

I loved this, and I can't wait to see the finished product!
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:iconether101:
Ether101 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2006
Oro......o_o
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:iconhanshin-kyrii:
Hanshin-Kyrii Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2006
I'm 21. I liked this. The layout was really easy to follow and fun to navigate. The facts were really interesting and the visuals were too without being over the top. Seems like you have a really good setup here. Although it looks like some of your links didn't work with the projector.
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dark-nation Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2006
How old are you?
I am 20
Did you have any problems navigating around the project?
Nope, although in the first section, "Senses", the My Space portion looked like they would be clickable links to the answers to those questions. Otherwise navigation was fine.
Did you learn anything, or find the project interesting?
Nothing I have not heard before, but the presentation of it was very good for visual reference (Which is a great way in teaching something).
Did you like the visuals (drawings, animation etc)?
The overall concept stuck to core essentials and did not bog down the user with too many or two few options. I'd say just add in the remaining sections and maybe an "Outro", and it's good to go!
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NapalmPhoenix Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2006
Oooh...
I leanered something... Here's hoping you get a good grade for this (if that's how that works)... Now make one that can teach me physics ;) ...

How old are you? 13
Did you have any problems navigating around the project? Can't access My/Your Space in memory
Did you learn anything, or find the project interesting? plenty/quite
Did you like the visuals (drawings, animation etc)? yep...
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:iconkiipy:
kiipy Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2006
I am 15 yers old
i do not have eny navigation brodlem
memory staff did not work at all

this is nice :Zest:
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:icontsuki-usagi:
tsuki-usagi Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2006
16
No problems
Actually learned something, very interesting and I'd love to see the finished project!
Loved the animations etc ^_^

Great job!
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:iconminahikari:
MinaHikari Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2006
I find it really cool and unique!
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:iconfrumpman:
Frumpman Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2006
heres one thing I'm sure someone else has of course allready pointed out but we in fact can sense 5 different tastes the fifth being Umami (just to make sure you take me seriously [link] =P)
not exactly sure if I understand the description of it but just a thought for the betterment and such of your allready awsome work here ^^
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Seiwyen Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2006
What a cool project =^_^=...very comprehensive and easy to follow. Visually entertaining, clear and concise narratives...Navigation is simple and childlike...but pleasing. Other than the problems you've already flagged, it's great. I like the animation although it would be great to see the robot doing more actions. All in all though very easy to understand and navigate plus it gave interesting facts in an interesting manner. I'm 44 but still felt compelled to see what it was all about. =D Keep up the good work! Well done.
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JedexaKrazyLee Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2006
very awesome! i love it. and i'm an early highschooler myself, so this is an easy-to-understand kinda thing. the answer to the three questions (no including the how old am i question): no, yes, yes
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:iconbrokenphoenix264:
BrokenPhoenix264 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2006
Wow...I love it! <3
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:icondrosana:
drosana Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006
How old are you? 13 xp
Did you have any problems navigating around the project? yah, in memory, i couldn't get to the my space
Did you learn anything, or find the project interesting? yah, i learned alot, it was really fun too
Did you like the visuals (drawings, animation etc)? yah! the robot it the brain idea is really cute,,,all in all this thing was fun!
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:iconmuffinsareyum:
Muffinsareyum Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2006   Photographer
It's awesome! And for your answers: How old are you?: 13.
Did you have any problems navigating around the project?: No.
Did you learn anything, or find the project interesting? I found it interesting, but I didn't learn much, except for the part about dreaming.
Did you like the visuals (drawings, animation etc)? Yeah! FANTASTIC work!
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:iconaxtar:
Axtar Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2006
This was awesome. So many kudos to you!
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:iconpepper-sh:
Pepper-sh Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006
How old are you?
21

Did you have any problems navigating around the project?
a little.. i do hope to see the "back to main" or any main buttons to be at the same or identical spots, as it is where people will see first if they want to go back to the ain page.. it will be quite disturbing or annoying if they cant find the button at the first place... i notice some of the page button are in different location..

the Music.. back ground music is okay.. eventhoo the music didn't play when it start.. and only plays after i ended the imargination session. it will be wise to have the music played at all time.. and it's all depends on the volume of the music.. such as.. while during naratting, it will be wise to have the music played but of coz..with smaller volume.. and it will also be wise to have the volume bar option for the music.. to let different ppl to listen with their favorite volume strenght.

p.s. mind i ask for the name of the music?..

Did you learn anything, or find the project interesting?
Oh yes, i think it's lovely... very lovely... perfect for education presentation for kids and children

Did you like the visuals (drawings, animation etc)?
for me it meets the standard but for me.. it's just average.. but it's in the standards
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:iconservina:
Servina Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006
:wow: :clap:
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CrAzYfish101 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad your aware of the problems this way you can go back and fix them.
It was easy to get from one section to another and if this was how we learned about the brain in class I would have payed more attention to what the teacher was saying.
Age: 17
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quest721 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2006
like......woa @_@ that is so cool!
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:iconrevenant0112:
Revenant0112 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2006  Student Digital Artist
Very nice :)
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:iconqren:
qren Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2006
nice voice and accent. is it urs? ^^
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:iconrisachantag:
Risachantag Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2006
Yes, with a slight echo effect on it. ^^; I'm a little embarrased to use my own voice, as I'm not a very clear speaker, but it's good enough for a uni assignment.
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Fawkiias-Pixel-Art Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2006   Photographer
I am 15; I had no problems at all. I found the project interesting; and I learned plenty. I enjoyed the visuals as well. Nice job. <3
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Kvb Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2006
I only have one piece of criticism. What you called the Hermann Grid Illusion, is actually the Scintillating Grid Illusion.

So far so good for the rest of it.
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Risachantag Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2006
^^; Actually, both names seem to be used for it. I just went for the first of the two, so not to confuse everyone.
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:iconkvb:
Kvb Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2006
Well, technically the Hermann Grid Illusion is without the dots. It -is- basically the same thing, just a less effective version.

Just sayin', though.
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:iconmikosan180:
MikoSan180 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2006
WOW that is SO cool! I love it!
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:icontigerchu:
Tigerchu Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, a whole project.
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:icontigerchu:
Tigerchu Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
INteresting.
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:iconkpanthony:
kpanthony Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2006
That was very interesting. I really makes me think on how I can't remember some memories that happened (like appearing in a car then black-out and appear in a building then black-out again; then start to remember from about 4 or 5 to the present).
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:iconfooly-cooly:
FOOLY-COOLY Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2006  Student
Wow, this is very...
professional..
and very impressive!

It's really awesome, I love all the different things you can do!

And the eye-tester was great

:clap: Very nice!
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:iconthedeax:
TheDeax Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2006
Nice ! Something different
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